User talk:Mulad

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Regarding Free as in Freedom I would question the wisdom of including "Chapter #:", as part of the article title for every chapter. In the immediate circumstances there is no problem, but over time, as more books are added it may not be helpful, we will end up with a long series of articles that have no relationship with each other but whose titles all begin with "Chapter 1". In this case, since the author has conveniently given titles to his chapters, my suggestion would be to move all of these articles to the chapter title alone. Thus Chapter 1: For Want of a Printer would simply become For Want of a Printer.

More generic (and otherwise unnamed) titles like Preface might be better presented as Free as in Freedom:Preface

The chapter headings within the article appear to be redundant. Such headings might be more justifiable in situations where you are putting more than one short chapter in a single article.

It would also be a good idea if the article for each chapter began with something like

This is chapter 1 of Roy Williams' book Free as in Freedom. For information on the copyright status see the head article

I hope this helps